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Spring’s Laughter in Bloom (Haiku, Limerick & Cinquain)

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1. Haiku: Early Spring Daffodils

Early spring breathes life,
Daffodils poke through cold earth,
Spring’s laughter in bloom.

daffodils breaking through the earth, symbolizing the vibrant laughter and renewal that spring brings. The scenes are imbued with a sense of warmth and freshness, marking the transition from winter to spring.

2. Limerick: Lingering Snow

There once was a snowflake named Joe,
Who lingered, not ready to go.
He danced on the breeze,
With astonishing ease,
Till the sun made him water, oh no!

Joe, the snowflake, dancing on the breeze under a sunny sky humorously encapsulates the playful spirit of the limerick. Joe's transformation from a snowflake to a water droplet adds a touch of whimsy to the concept of lingering snow.

3. Cinquain: Leap Day, Snow Becomes Rain

Leap day,
Snow whispers goodbye,
Transforming under skies,
From crystal gowns to teardrops clear,
Spring’s rain.

magical moment when winter snow transforms into spring rain. The dance of seasons is captured with snowflakes turning into raindrops against the backdrop of changing skies, embodying the poem's peaceful and poetic tone.

These poems embrace the spirit of change, the whimsical nature of the seasons, and the peculiarities of weather, all while keeping a light-hearted and playful tone.

In response to Tanka Tuesday’s 24 Seasons Syllabic Poetry Challenge, No. 23, 2/27/24, Part II: Snow Becomes Rain (February 19 – March 4) Usui 雨水

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8 responses to “Spring’s Laughter in Bloom (Haiku, Limerick & Cinquain)”

  1. ben Alexander Avatar
    ben Alexander

    The limerick is my fave! 😀

    Sincerely,
    David

  2. msjadeli Avatar
    msjadeli

    Very much enjoyed your poems and the graphics you used. Very light and spring-y.

  3. Jude Avatar
    Jude

    Gorgeous poems, both haikus and limericks

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  5. Gwen M. Plano Avatar
    Gwen M. Plano

    Beautiful poetry and images. Thank you for sharing. 😊

  6. yvettemcalleiro Avatar
    yvettemcalleiro

    First, I must say your banner is fabulous! I absolutely love it. And your poems are wonderful. Your limerick had me laughing. Well done!

    Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
    http://yvettemcalleiro.blogspot.com

  7. Colleen Chesebro Avatar
    Colleen Chesebro

    Hi there! Welcome, and thanks so much for joining in! 🌸

  8. Melissa Lemay Avatar
    Melissa Lemay

    Love these!🌞

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