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 This was originally written June 2nd 2017 @ 8:55am

 

Senitmental is how she felt nineteen years ago today 

Ernestly she tried to hold onto that moment in time 

Never wanting it to end, because it was so precious 

The joy in her heart was more than she could believe

Is this what love is supposed to feel like

Might this capture a glimpse of our Father’s love for us 

Either way, all she knows is that, the youngest part of her heart turned 

Nineteen today and that is reason a for sentimental-ness

Today’s assignment for us all is to be sentimental and compassionate to one 

Another. It is our sole purpose in this life of ours to 

Live free and to love on purpose

Remember to Live Free and Love On Purpose 💋🎉✌

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60 responses to “Pleased Steps”

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  2. Celestial LfLop Burgess Avatar
    Celestial LfLop Burgess

    Thank you very much Sierra for your kind words. Truely appreciated. 😉

  3. sierraschomburg Avatar
    sierraschomburg

    I love the structure and flow of your poem. It was truly beautiful! I’ve read a couple of your posts and you’re very thoughtful and I appreciate reading your work.

  4. travelnidajourney Avatar
    travelnidajourney

    You have an extreme poetic qualities to write and Express !! Love your creation

  5. Denice Avatar
    Denice

    What a beautifully written poem for a birthday girl. Happiest birthday to the celebrant!

  6. Elizabeth O Avatar
    Elizabeth O

    You have a wonderful way with words and I thoroughly enjoy reading your inspired posts. Keep it up!

  7. Jennifer L Avatar
    Jennifer L

    What a beautiful poem and sentiments. I love how honest and raw poetry can be.

  8. mike shugrhed Avatar
    mike shugrhed

    What beautiful words – it’s a pleasure to read them. Also – love your site. Keep up the great work 🙂

  9. David Elliott Avatar
    David Elliott

    Such beautiful thoughts expressed here. I always loved the poetry that took a word and then drew it out and enriched the meaning like this.

  10. ljdove23 Avatar
    ljdove23

    Ah this is such a gorgeous poem! Happy 19th birthday to your daughter! You sound like such a proud Mum!!

  11. Samantha Avatar
    Samantha

    I love this! Sentimental is a great word and the poem is beautiful! Happy birthday to your daughter xx

  12. margarette Avatar
    margarette

    What a lovely poem. I admire people that has a skills in writing. happy 19th to your daughter!

  13. Samantha Bye Avatar
    Samantha Bye

    Lovely poem. I’m such a sucker for sentimentality 🙂

  14. Shigufa Saleheen Avatar
    Shigufa Saleheen

    Awww, is this poem style called an acrostic? I remember studying it in school but I was never really good at it, so I admire the way you crafted this! And happy 19th to your daughter!!

  15. Sondra Barker Avatar
    Sondra Barker

    Loved your poem it was very beautiful. I love the concept of spelling it out like that.

  16. Sondra Barker Avatar
    Sondra Barker

    I love the poem, it was very beautiful. The concept of spelling it out like that always makes it more interesting to read.

  17. Celestial LfLop Burgess Avatar
    Celestial LfLop Burgess

    Thanks a ton Melanie for your kind words. Truly appreciate them. 😉

  18. Melanie May Avatar
    Melanie May

    What a lovely birthday gift to your daughter. This poem is something she can remember forever and always read and think of you. It is a really lovely poem and I love how you structured it.

  19. Nicole Anderson Avatar
    Nicole Anderson

    Such a lovely poem. So well written and it read so well. I can only wish to have written talent like that.

  20. adeasnarrative Avatar
    adeasnarrative

    Really nice poem…made me think about my own family: my mother and how sentimental the relationship is.

  21. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thanks for stopping by 😉

  22. organicdealdivai Avatar
    organicdealdivai

    Stopping by from Bloggers United! 🙂

  23. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Hi Karen, since 2014 I’ve been trying to get better at writing. Thanks for stopping by. 💯👌

  24. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Kimberly truly appreciated 👌💯😉

  25. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thanks a ton Pranshu 👌💯😉

  26. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you so much Ratisha 💯👌😉

  27. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Again I truly appreciate your kind words 😉👌💯

  28. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Dunja. Have an awesome day😉👌

  29. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Utkarsh 💯👌😉

  30. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Hi Kiki, thank you very much. Have a great day👌😉

  31. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Hannah. I just might do that. I hadn’t thought of that actually. Thank you for the suggestion 👌😉

  32. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you and you are absolutely correct, life can makes us feel sentimental when we look back on our lives. Thanks for dropping by 😉

  33. Hannah Malanga (@idaintyit) Avatar
    Hannah Malanga (@idaintyit)

    I haven’t seen anyone do something like this before, it was really lovely! I am a sentimental person, this would be nice to have on a canvas in your home

  34. kikicarlson Avatar
    kikicarlson

    What beautiful words. Most days something will trigger the sentimental side of me!

  35. Utkarsh Anand Avatar
    Utkarsh Anand

    beautifully written….. a great appreciation from the core of the heart….

  36. Dunja Avatar
    Dunja

    Beautifully written. Really creative also, i enjoy reading it 🙂

  37. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Elena. Have a great day😉

  38. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Lynn. Have a wonderful day👌

  39. Sharon Beauty Prime Avatar
    Sharon Beauty Prime

    I’m a sentimental person by nature and I got totally relate. Lovely post with great impact of sentimentalists.

  40. Ratisha Goyal Avatar
    Ratisha Goyal

    How inventive idea it is! Loved your style of writing. You weaved such a beautiful piece of writing with your creativity.

  41. Pranshu Nigam Avatar
    Pranshu Nigam

    Your description of the word really made me sentimental. Best wishes to your daughter and her future!

  42. Kimberly Avatar
    Kimberly

    Love this, thank you for a piece beautifully written

  43. Karen Grosz Avatar
    Karen Grosz

    Beautiful job in using sentimental create a great poem. I haven’t been reading poetry lately. I need to add that to my self-care routine.

  44. Joanna Avatar
    Joanna

    Lovely poem, very beautiful words and I like how they tie together at the beginning, writing “sentiment” on horizontal

  45. It's All Relative Avatar
    It’s All Relative

    I am a very sentimental person so I can easily relate! <3 Well Done 🙂

  46. Fatima Avatar
    Fatima

    Beautifully written. I wish your daughter a very happy birthday and lots of blessings and best wishes for the future.

    Fatima | http://www.blogsbyfa.com

  47. IamVagabond Avatar
    IamVagabond

    Very well written and impactful. Thanks for sharing with the world.

    I travel and blog at http://www.iamvagabond.com

  48. Tori Gabriel (@anadultieradult) Avatar
    Tori Gabriel (@anadultieradult)

    What a great word of the day. Your poem definitely made me feel sentimental. Happy birthday to your daughter.

  49. Nina Alexander Avatar
    Nina Alexander

    “Love purposely”. You got me here and made me think. Thank you. Happy women’s day <3

  50. Elena Toma Avatar
    Elena Toma

    Very nice and sweet! You made us all feel a little bit sentimental. Happy birthday for your daughter!

  51. lynnblackmar Avatar
    lynnblackmar

    What a lovely poem, and quite a tribute to the birthday girl!

  52. bamahomeschool Avatar
    bamahomeschool

    This is a great poem or elegant way to express your thoughts. Sometimes life causes us to feel sentimental and think back over life and what we’ve done.

  53. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thank you Keiayra. I love the ‘mermaid’ part 😉 Sometimes we have to be reminded to stop and remember the good that life brings. Thank you for stopping by 😉 Have a great day

  54. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Hi Klaudia, thanks a ton for the comment and the 5 star ranking. Have an amazing day and thanks for stopping by 😉

  55. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    I am really glad you like it Ana. You have a wonderful day 😉

  56. Mermaid Keiayra Avatar
    Mermaid Keiayra

    I think this was well-wrtiten and to the point. I sometimes find myself trying to relive sentimental moments from six years ago today. Time and life happens, and it almost numbs those aspects. Cheers to the new senitmentals!

  57. Klaudia Avatar
    Klaudia

    Lovely poem , lovely post , lovely site all together . Had to give you a 5 star ranking for your daughter’s birthday . Thanks for sharing the love <3

  58. SunDragonLady Choi Avatar
    SunDragonLady Choi

    Thanks a ton Georginna. I am very excited. Have a great day 😉

  59. Ana De Jesus Avatar
    Ana De Jesus

    Great word of the day. I have been feeling very sentimental recently x

  60. Georgianna Avatar
    Georgianna

    Beautiful poem. Happy birthday to your daughter!

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